Long winded

pjjjjj

Veteran Expediter
Hi again,
I visited recently and wanted to ask for your feedback on something.. and then it took awhile to have the time to figure out exactly what my issue is, or how to put it into words.. and now I have it.. but when I start typing it, it turns out sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo longggggggggggggggggggggggggggg, I'm sure I would lose everyone's attention in the first paragraph and nobody would end up giving me feedback!
Ugh!
I think I need the services of someone better at writing to help me word this properly so that it's short and sweet. Any takers, Turtle? :eek:
 
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Moot

Veteran Expediter
Owner/Operator
Maybe try something like this: Hi again.
Short, sweet and to the point. Since I 'm typing, hi again to you!
 

Rocketman

Veteran Expediter
Did she just ask Turtle to make a short post? :D

Personally, I think you should just post it. Those who can't overlook the length of the post won't read it....and that's probably a good thing.
 
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Stone Expeditors LLC

Stone Expeditors LLC

(941) 286-2558
Advertiser
Immediate Opening for Team Expedite Straight Truck

The best fleet in trucking is seeking a couple STRONG TEAMS to fill the seats of our new straight trucks with large luxury custom bolt sleepers and all the amenities. The market is back, the money is rolling in, and the wheels just keep on turning! Direct deposit every Friday. No deductions, no micromanagement from fleet owners or managers. Flexibl ... Apply Today!

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